Curricular Response

My Compare and Contrast Paragraph about “Just Lather, That’s All” and Rope reflects both my strengths and weaknesses. For Example, something I show strength in is the transition words which will make me continue to use in my next essay. In this Paragraph something I might need to change in order to improve my writing are adding more comma’s and periods to have less run on sentences. I also need to do more pruning to eliminate words and make the paragraph overall less wordy.

Core Competency Self Reflection

One of my top priorities in the next coming weeks for my writing assignments will be brain storming my idea’s before doing the outline. The reason why this is really important to me is so I can visually see and gather my thoughts/ideas together; creating a better paragraph. And also making it easier for me to write my final copy. The second top priority for me is focusing more on the main point of the paragraph instead of drifting off and writing about something different to not confuse the reader.