Curricular Response:

My writing goal was pruning, and I think I pruned well in this assignment it was one of my shorter paragraphs that got straight to the point and covers all the information needed. I talked about cultural relativism thoroughly without rambling on other moral theories that could’ve been connected.

Core Competency Self-Assessment:

What is one aspect of your writing that you still need to work on and how might you get help or improve in this particular area?

I still need to work on integrating quotes and adding details to my argument to back it up. as in adding more information before and after quotes, learning how to blend my information without being choppy and trying to flow my different ideas to make them all under the same umbrella. I will continue to write planning sheets before writing paragraphs so I can lay down all my information and quotes and know how to lay it out on paper. I will also reread all my work so everything flows nicely while I read and also learn to go back and delete sentences when they start with “conclusion is…” or “secondly” to hopefully prune and better my writing for assignments given to in future classes.