Core Competency Self-Assessment

How did I act on the feedback from my first and second writing assignments in writing this one.

The feedback I received on my previous assignments was that I had to prune my work meaning I had to get rid of extra unnecessary words and phrases. At first it was a big struggle for me as I had always been used to writing a lot. However, through repeated exercise on this I got the hang of it. I wrote my paragraph as I normally would and went back and looked it over. I then took out multiple unnecessary bits until it was fully pruned.