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Curricular Response:
- Explain how this paragraph reflects both the strengths and the weaknesses in your writing. For example, what in this paragraph is good writing that you will continue make sure you do, and then what about this paragraph is something you might change in order to improve your writing.
This paragraph reflects my strengths through using my data and evidence to support my reasoning. For instance, my main topic for this paragraph was to compare and contrast the film “WALLE” and the story “The Machine Stops.” In order to create a strong and well developed synthesis paragraph, I needed to have an advanced understanding of each story so I can pick apart and piece together specific examples from each. My strength to gather data was demonstrated when I created a document that held all of my notes for Walle and compared it to The Machine Stops. I used all of the examples and explanations to help support the similarities and differences in my paragraph. By having a good foundation of reasoning and incorporating it efficiently in my paragraph, I was able to write a concise synthesis paragraph. A weakness that I encountered during this assignment involved making my sentences awkwardly constructed or worded weirdly. In the future, I want to improve on my vocabulary and the ability to construct concise sentences.
Core Competency Self Reflection:
- Think generally about you and writing: describe what writing is like for you? easy? Hard? Why is it easy or hard? Or what specific parts are easy or hard? Or what kinds of writing is easier or more enjoyable for you than others? Do you write outside of a formal school situation? How ? when? What is that like?
Writing for me can be easy at times, however, more often, I find myself struggling to be creative with my writing ideas and being able to connect one to the other. For instance, creating my generalization sentences and my “So What?” portions go my paragraph, I tend to have a difficult time figuring out what to write. This is because I feel as though sometimes I have too many thoughts and ideas that I have trouble narrowing it down and connecting the most valuable ideas in an efficient manner. The kinds of writing that is easier for me than others would be explaining a research topic. I find this a bit easier to do because it relies less on my creativity and more one universal facts. For instance, if I had to write a paragraph on why plants contain chlorophyl and are able to carry out photosynthesis, I would be able to explain it thoroughly and connect one example to another because I can rely on scientific facts.