Curricular Response-

One thing I think I did well in this essay was add evidence from the twon stories I had to read in class. I feel that I did this well because I have included direct quotations from the text into my story to support my ideas. I feel like one thing I could have improved on is pruning my work as I feel like their is some unnecessary narration in my writting. I feel like I could also improve on my choice of words because I feel like my writing sounds a bit generic. I could include more powerful words next time to help my writing sound stronger.

Core Competency Self Reflection-

I feel that writing for me is some what easy and hard because I feel like my writing strategies are not fully developed yet. For me pruning was a bit difficult as my word selections were already very basic and generic. Personally I prefer story writing or journaling as I do not really need to follow a specific format. I do not write outside of school as a hobby as I am quite busy and do not really enjoy writing. I will continue to practice my writing in my day to day life and in my post secondary career.