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Curricular Response:
Explain what you see as the greatest strength in this paragraph. In other words what does this paragraph do well and why?
I think that this paragraph includes smooth topic sentences and a great concluding sentence because I feel like it attracts the attention of the readers. In Those two sentences I added interesting details to grab the readers attention. These two sentences added the most important part of the paragraph because it describes what I was writing about. The concluding sentence also wraps all thoughts up very smoothly which is great. So therefor I think I did this very well out of this paragraph.
Core Competency Self-Assessment:
How did you act on the feedback from your first literary paragraph in writing this one?
When I received my feedback for the first time, I was happy, but I wanted to improve my mark. I saw that there were few things that I needed to work on such as fragment sentences, spelling, and minor other things. So, when I got another opportunity to write another paragraph, I was prepared to make myself more aware of the changes I needed to make. I used spell check, got extra support from my teacher while writing my second paragraph, and I even got a fair understanding on fragment sentences. So, this helped improve my mark which I was happy about. All though there are trivial things I do still need improvement in.