Slam Poetry Reflection

The slam poetry was a great exercise in building confidence. I strongly believe that my volume, tone, pitch, hand gestures, and the content was appropriate. However, there is always room for improvement. I am mostly proud of the slam’s content. I feel that the ideas were relatable and used many poetic devices. My regular talking voice is enough for others to hear me from a decent distance. I was content knowing everyone could hear me, and judging by the attention from the class, that my poem was worth listening to.  

If I were to do this again, I think that my focus of improvement should be on 3 things: Hand gestures, tone, and number of lines presented. I tried my best to use an extensive repertoire of words, while keeping my phrases simple enough to understand, yet vaguely enigmatic (via imagery) enough to keep the phrases in the thoughts of the listeners. 

When practicing, I stuttered briefly, and that caused me to lose my point on the script. For next time, I will have one point per cue card to not be lost, as best as possible. Right before going up to present my slam poem, I knew that I felt a little nervous, I could feel my legs wanting to jitter but, I was thinking too much about making sure I had memorized the poem. For next time, I will try to memorize it well in advance. Maybe that will help relieve the anxiety and the jittery feelings I had. 

I tried my best to limit the number of ideas that can be added into the poem by setting a strict context to poetic devices, so I’d simplify my rubric, as long as I reach or pass the amount of words/lines needed; and with less to go off, I can conclude the lines and poem overall easier than trying to fill in the end with every possible conclusion I can think of. What was going through my mind when I started looking for a conclusion was trying to eliminate options against the strict context and if there’s any possible that could end in a poetic device, or simply any possible vagueness or puzzling mini concepts, then organizing the remaining into categories of simple, mid, and too open-ended or difficult to understand. I organized and eliminated those categories thanks to Ms. Touré’s advice of having things relatable but, not having a possible context misunderstanding, and not too unorthodoxy words. Lastly, I inserted whichever had the best rings to them. 

Core Competencies in Poem:

I use evidence to make judgements or decisions as demonstrated in line 3: “Me at 9 was a common sense and unknown variable questionnaire…” meaning I took answers to questions, and what proves those right or wrong to narrow down my options of what to do in certain situations, then make the judgement of which action(s) to take based on prioritization. An example of when this happened is when choosing to finish my booklet of questions about the book previously read, over doing the journal prompt but, I wrote down the journal prompt first knowing it would be taken down. 

I seek, develop and weigh options as demonstrated by writing down a bank of possible words for each description and poetic devices I want to use, and develop new ways to connect contexts. For each context I produced, I sought alternate word placements to challenge basic English grammar. In doing so, weighed options of which poetic device(s) to go for, as more opened to me for each set of possible word placements I verified could work.