Curricular Response

something that I did well of this paragraph is the pruning. This was one ,of my first time doing this and I think I did well. I may have over done it in some part but over all I think it made my writing more clear and concise. One of the weaknesses I think I have might be over doing the pruning. I feel like I took out some good words that were not necessary for the grammar but would have helped with a strong argument. However when writing normally I do not think that I prune enough. So one thing I would like to improve on for the future is pruning more often.

Core Competency Reflection

While writing on paper I sometimes find it hard to write more formal rather than writing on a computer. I find that Writing on a computer is more enjoyable than writing on paper. I feel i can write faster and if I make a mistake I can easily fix it. I do not really write outside of school, However I sometimes write formal emails for work and to people.